What do you and your family usually do during Christmas?
학생이 쓴 원문
Usually, I receive lego bricks for a Christmas present from my parents.
And I have to make them, and it usually tooks 4~5 hours.
So in Christmas, I usually spend my time for making lego bricks.
But sometimes I got other presents.
In that case, I usually play with my friends.
강사 첨삭
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Building Lego bricks really are one of your hobbies. :) Christmas is really a joyous occasion for everyone.
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-Teacher EliseUsually, I receive lego bricks for a Christmas present from my parents.
>> Usually, I receive Lego bricks from my parents as a Christmas present.
And I have to make them, and it usually tooks 4~5 hours.
>> I have to build them afterwards and it usually takes 4-5 hours.
So in Christmas, I usually spend my time for making lego bricks.
>> So during Christmas, I usually spend time making Lego bricks.
But sometimes I got other presents.
>> But sometimes I receive other gifts.
In that case, I usually play with my friends.
>> CORRECT
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