What do you appreciate the most when you are traveling?
학생이 쓴 원문
I always appreciate to travel so safety. Especially When I arrived in my home, I feel so thanks to god. Because sometimes I can see some incident on news. someone was damaged by bad guys or someone was happened by natural disaster during traveling. So I always try to appreciate after I came back to my home. It\'s because I think a person that is positive can everything.
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Happy Monday, Cindy!
Nothing is more powerful for your future than being a gatherer of good ideas and information.
Thank you for doing your daily homework. Your passion is undeniably incomparable. Good point on this! A lot of people gave a different answer when asked traveling and this is the first time I got a different answer. Keep going because in the future, all your effort shall be paid off. :)
Aki~
I always appreciate to travel so safety.
>>> I always appreciate to travel safely,
Especially When I arrived in my home, I feel so thanks to god.
>>> Especially when I arrived home, I feel so grateful to God.
Because sometimes I can see some incident on news.
>>> Correct!
Or >>> Because I sometimes see some incident on news.
Someone was damaged by bad guys or someone was happened by natural disaster during traveling.
>>> Someone was hurt by bad guys or someone encountered a natural disaster while traveling.
So I always try to appreciate after I came back to my home.
>>> So I always try to appreciate that after I came back home.
It\'s because I think a person that is positive can everything.
>>> It\'s because I think a person that is positive can be everything.
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