What do you borrow from your friends?
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1. What do you borrow from your friends?
I`d like to borrow a rural house from my friend. because I`d take the rest and breathe natural fresh air.
As well as it would be nice to live in the suburb environment.
2. What would you do if someone lends you one million dollars?
That`ll great thing. Maybe I sleep on it and I get many thinks how to spend lots of money. There are many ways that is to buy a rural
house or a real estate and to buy a yacht. Otherwise to start my own business. That is the question.
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Hi Huje,
Thank you for sending it your ideas!
Have a nice day and talk to you again next time!
Teacher Elly.
What do you borrow from your friends?
1. What do you borrow from your friends?
I`d like to borrow a rural house from my friend.
I`d like to borrow a rural house from my friend.
>>I`d like to borrow a house in the rural area from my friend.
because I`d take the rest and breathe natural fresh air.
>>Because, I want to take a rest and breathe in some natural fresh air.
As well as it would be nice to live in the suburb environment.
>>As well as it would be nice to live in a suburban environment.
2. What would you do if someone lends you one million dollars?
That`ll great thing. >>That`ll be a great thing.
Maybe I sleep on it and I get many thinks how to spend lots of money.
>>Maybe, I\'ll sleep on it first and I will think of many ways on how to spend these lots of money.
There are many ways that is to buy a rural
house or a real estate and to buy a yacht.
house or a real estate and to buy a yacht.
>>There are many ways in how to spend the money. The first one is, I will buy a rural house or another type of a real estate, and then I will buy a yacht.
Otherwise to start my own business.
>>Otherwise, I will just start my own business.
That is the question.
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or>>That is the million-dollar question.
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