What do you borrow from your friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
Since this year, I\'m studying master\'s degree in collage.
Sometimes, I didn\'t bring my pen. So I always borrow a pen from my classmate.
For bring a pen, I took my bag and many pen.
And I use a tablet pc, It has a note application. So I don\'t need a pen. But I must remember that I will take charge unit for tablet pc.
Studying with a tablet is very comport better than pen and note.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thank you so much for doing your homework. You did a wonderful job. Please take note of the corrections I made on your sentences. Keep it up and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
Since this year, I\'m studying master\'s degree in collage.
>> Since this year, I\'ve been studying for a master\'s degree in college.
Sometimes, I didn\'t bring my pen. So I always borrow a pen from my classmate.
>> Sometimes, I forget to bring my pen, so I always borrow one from my classmate.
For bring a pen, I took my bag and many pen.
>> To bring a pen, I took my bag and many pens.
And I use a tablet pc, It has a note application. So I don\'t need a pen.
>> Correct
OR >> And I use a tablet PC, it has a note application, so I don\'t need a pen.
But I must remember that I will take charge unit for tablet pc.
>> But I must remember that I will need to charge the unit for the tablet PC.
Studying with a tablet is very comport better than pen and note.
>> Studying with a tablet is much more comfortable than using a pen and paper.
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