What do you both like doing with your closest friend?
학생이 쓴 원문
my closest friend must be Han, he lives in right next to my apartment. its really close! so i can meet him whenever i want. so you know when i want some beer or want to go karaoke. i just call to him and say \"let\'s get out\" and then we go pup or karaoke together. oh sometimes we go to gym to do some health training! that\'s it
강사 첨삭
Hello Robin!
You and your friend like bonding together and you are even neighbors. It will not be too lonely if you are alone at home because you can just knock on your friend\'s door and do some fun things together. ^^
~T. Maine
my closest friend must be Han, he lives in right next to my apartment.
>>My closest friend is Han. He lives right next to my apartment.
its really close! so i can meet him whenever i want.
>>It\'s really close! So I can meet him whenever I want to.
so you know when i want some beer or want to go karaoke.
>>You know, when I want some beer or want to sing in a karaoke room,
i just call to him and say \"let\'s get out\" and then we go pup or karaoke together.
>>I just call him and say, \"Let\'s go out\" then we go to pubs or karaoke rooms together.
oh sometimes we go to gym to do some health training! that\'s it
>>Sometimes, we go to the gym to do some health training. That\'s it!
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