What do you complain about when you are bored? For you, what are some best ways to stop being bored?
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Being bored is the most terrible thing that I am facing. I feel frustrated when I am bored, so I have to find anything that I can do.
I don\'t like staying at home alone so I always try to make an appointment with my close friends or colleagues on weekends or go to somewhere with my family such as a science library, a park and a cafe for kids. There are a lot of things to do when we are bored. we can go to the cinema to watch movies, go swim, enjoy indoor sports and play a computer game. All we need is the time and money.
Prices in Korea is quite higher than Asian country, even Europe. Because of this people hesitate to go out for fun. In addition, Koreans work too many hours a day and week. Although, there is a policy in our country about working hours limit in week that people can\'t work over 56 hours a week. However, it cause a lot of problem to employees and owners as well. If workers have to reduce their working time, the salary would be cut and owner has to take the loss.
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Hi [이름]! How was your day? Thanks for answering the question. Yes. We can\'t avoid complaining
if we feel bored at times when we can\'t do anything. It\'s good that you are able to connect the boredom
with your job. In the Philippines, government employees work for 45 hours per week regularly. Other employees
who work in a private or small companies work for 45 to 54 hours per week. And some people still complain about it
that they work too hard.
~~May~~
Being bored is the most terrible thing that I am facing.I feel frustrated when I am bored, so I have to find anything that I can do.
>> CORRECT
I don\'t like staying at home alone so I always try to make an appointment with my close friends or colleagues on weekends or go to somewhere with my family such as a science library, a park and a cafe for kids.
I don\'t like staying at home alone so I always try to make an appointment with my close friends or colleagues on weekends or go to somewhere with my family such as a science library, a park and a cafe for kids.
>> I don\'t like staying at home alone so I always try to meet my close friends or colleagues on weekends or go somewhere with my family.
(Your sentence is too long. You have to make it simpler. Some words or phrases are not needed. Making your sentence as simple as this is already understandable.)
There are a lot of things to do when we are bored.
>> CORRECT
we can go to the cinema to watch movies, go swim, enjoy indoor sports and play a computer game.
>> We can go to the cinema to watch movies, go swimming, enjoy indoor sports and play a computer game.
All we need is the time and money.
>> CORRECT
Prices in Korea is quite higher than Asian country, even Europe.
Prices in Korea is quite higher than Asian country, even Europe.
>> Prices in Korea are quite higher than in other Asian countries, even Europe.
Because of this, people hesitate to go out for fun.
In addition, Koreans work too many hours a day and week.
>> CORRECT
Although, there is a policy in our country about working hours limit in week that people can\'t work over 56 hours a week.
>> Even if there is a policy in our country about limited working hours in a week that people can\'t work over 56 hours.
However, it cause a lot of problem to employees and owners as well.
>> However, it causes a lot of problems to employees and owners as well.
If workers have to reduce their working time, the salary would be cut and owner has to take the loss.
>> If workers have to reduce their working time, salary would also be cut and owners has to be responsible with the loss.
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