What do you consider as the greatest miracle in your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my life, the greates miracle is I was born in my family. My family is very good and my parents are nice to me and I can do. I an still studying and I have a lot of chance, that must be a miracle.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
That was fast again! Thanks for the prompt reply!
-Rachel
In my life, the greates miracle is I was born in my family.
>> The greatest miracle of my life is to be born in my family.
My family is very good and my parents are nice to me and I can do.
>> My family is very good and my parents are nice to me and I can do the things that I like.
I an still studying and I have a lot of chance, that must be a miracle.
>> I am still studying and I have a lot of chances, so all of these are miracles.
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