What do you consider to be the most valuable item you own?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the most valuable item is wristwatch. It is a gift from a Japanese boss who is close to my father. I received it when I was 10, and it has not broken yet. I will use it as long as possible.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] U! ^^,)
Thank you for answering your homework.
Take care of your belongings. Anything that is neglected loses life sooner, whether it be a laptop, a car, a bicycle, a pair of shoes, a suit, or any other object.
If we took better care of our possessions, just think how much longer they would last and how much less waste we would make.
I will see you in our next class. Have a good day!
__T. Mayleen :)
I think the most valuable item is wristwatch.
>>> I think the most valuable item I own is a wrist watch.
It is a gift from a Japanese boss who is close to my father.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: It was given to me by a Japanese boss close to my father.
I received it when I was 10, and it has not broken yet.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: It was given to me when I was 10 and has not yet broken.
I will use it as long as possible.
>>> CORRECT
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