What do you consider to be your good and bad qualities?
학생이 쓴 원문
My strongest is sincerity when I work. Also, I try to do my best if I have my responsibility. Many people trust to my work. My bad quality is making a decision quickly, because, I don\'t like taking a time. Sometimes it leads to errors.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]! It\'s amazing how you put your heart in everything you do. Thank you for sharing!
-T.Sonny
My strongest is sincerity when I work.
>>My strongest quality is having sincerity when I work.
Also, I try to do my best if I have my responsibility.
>>Also, I try to do my best if I have a responsibility.
OR. When I am given a responsibility, I always try to give it my all.
Many people trust to my work.
>>Many people trust my work.
OR. Many people put their trust on me.
My bad quality is making a decision quickly, because, I don\'t like taking a time.
>>My bad quality is making decisions quickly which I do because I don\'t like waiting.
OR. I think, a bad quality that I have is impulsiveness; I hate waiting for too long.
Sometimes it leads to errors.
>>CORRECT.
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