What do you consider to be your weakness?
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I don’t have much experience working directly with clients, and so my client-facing communication skills definitely need some work. I’m much more comfortable digging deep into the data and providing the analysis, rather than talking through that with a client.
My weakness lies in that I try to take all the responsibilities to myself. I once was the debate team leader when I was a freshman in college. As I explained to my teammates about the deadline, what they needed to do, and even how to do it, one of them told me that I was like a mother to them. That is when I realized that I was not very good at effectively dividing the tasks. So, I entered myself into the marketing club for the marketplace just out of sheer interest, and I learned there about the beauty of cooperation. Through my experiences there, I grew to be more able to fulfill my tasks and show myself as a better member for the team.
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What do you consider to be your weakness?
I don’t have much experience working directly with clients, and so my client-facing communication skills definitely need some work.
>>> CORRECT
I’m much more comfortable digging deep into the data and providing the analysis, rather than talking through that with a client.
>>> I’m much more comfortable digging deep into the data and providing the analysis, rather than talking to a client.
My weakness lies in that I try to take all the responsibilities to myself.
My weakness lies in that I try to take all the responsibilities to myself.
>>> My weakness is that I try to take all the responsibilities to myself.
OR: I take all the responsibilities to myself, that it becomes my weakness sometimes.
I once was the debate team leader when I was a freshman in college.
>>> CORRECT
As I explained to my teammates about the deadline, what they needed to do, and even how to do it, one of them told me that I was like a mother to them.
>>> CORRECT
That is when I realized that I was not very good at effectively dividing the tasks.
>>> CORRECT
So, I entered myself into the marketing club for the marketplace just out of sheer interest, and I learned there about the beauty of cooperation.
>>> So, I joined into the marketing club in the marketplace just out of sheer interest, and I have learned there the beauty of cooperation.
Through my experiences there, I grew to be more able to fulfill my tasks and show myself as a better member for the team.
>>> Through my experiences there, I grew to be more capable of fulfilling my tasks and show myself as a better member for the team.
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