What do you consider to be your weakness?
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Math wasn’t my strongest subject in school. To be honest, as a student, I didn’t understand how it would be applicable in my adult life. Within a few years of being in the working world, though, I realized that I wanted to take my career in a more analytical direction. At first, I wasn’t sure where to begin, but I found some online courses that refreshed the important basics for me. In my most recent job, this new foundation has enabled me to do my own goal setting and tracking. Actually, getting over the math anxiety I had when I was younger has been incredibly empowering.
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What do you consider to be your weakness?
Math wasn’t my strongest subject in school.
>>> CORRECT
To be honest, as a student, I didn’t understand how it would be applicable in my adult life.
>>> CORRECT
Within a few years of being in the working world, though, I realized that I wanted to take my career in a more analytical direction.
>>> Within a few years of being in the working world, I realized that I wanted to take my career in a more analytical direction.
At first, I wasn’t sure where to begin, but I found some online courses that refreshed the important basics for me.
>>> At first, I wasn’t sure where to begin, but I found some online courses that refreshed me that basics and the important things to know.
In my most recent job, this new foundation has enabled me to do my own goal setting and tracking.
>>> In my most recent job in a new foundation has enabled me to do my own goal which includes setting and tracking.
Actually, getting over the math anxiety I had when I was younger has been incredibly empowering.
>>> Actually, getting over math anxiety that I had when I was young has been incredibly empowering.
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