What do you contribute back to society?
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There are a lot of ways to contribute back to society.
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It is the way to be happy for ourselves as well.
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For me, I can do very small stuffs like cleaning out my house and my neighbors.
>> For me, I can do some minor stuff like cleaning outside my house and my neighbors\' too.
Furthermore, I can donate my blood and then it can be used for patients who have same blood type like me.
>> Furthermore, I can donate my blood to be used by patients who have the same blood type as me.
I can use my unique skills for someone who would like to learn it.
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If they are children, I can teach anything from studying something to doing exercise because they are just kids so all I have to do is playing with them with various ways.
>> If they are children, I can teach anything from studying something to doing exercise because they are just kids so all I have to do is play with them in various ways.
I can also meet students who have same major as me and advice the ways to get a good job and the effective methods to study their majors.
>> I can also meet students who have the same major as me and give them some advice about the ways to get a good job and the effective methods to study their majors.
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