What do you define the word \"home\"?
학생이 쓴 원문
Nowadays, lots of people have their own house to live and do something with others. In my own opinion, I think home is a great place you can stay with your family. Home makes us cozy and comfortable than any other places such as resort and hotel. Home sometimes mean to you a place where you can have fun with families or friends. I can say that home makes us feel happy eventhough we had a bad mood. So, I can define the word \"home\" a cozy and fun place.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your definition of \"home\".
Your answer was really warm. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> Nowadays, lots of people have their own house to live in and do something with others.
In my own opinion, I think home is a great place you can stay with your family.
>> In my own opinion, I think home is a great place where you can stay with your family.
Home makes us cozy and comfortable than any other places such as resort and hotel.
>> Home makes us cozy and comfortable than any other places such as a resort and a hotel.
Home sometimes mean to you a place where you can have fun with families or friends.
>> Home sometimes means a place where you can have fun with families or friends.
I can say that home makes us feel happy even though we had a bad mood.
>> CORRECT.
So, I can define the word \"home\" a cozy and fun place.
>> So, I can define the word \"home\" as a cozy and fun place.
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