What do you do after when you argue with someone?
학생이 쓴 원문
There hasn\'t been a fight with anyone lately. So I\'ll think about what happened before. I don\'t talk straight away if I\'m angry or unhappy. Instead, they endure or Concession. I try to control my anger as much as I can, even though it can burst at once. So I try to persuade as much as I can when a struggle occurs. This is easier the other person to understand and there is no bad feeling about each other.
강사 첨삭
Hi Steve! There are people who get into our nerves sometimes. There are also times that we can\'t control our anger because it is a natural emotion. We are all humans. We feel things. Despite that fact that someone did something bad to us, it is better for us to be the better person. :)
There hasn\'t been a fight with anyone lately.
>> I haven\'t fought with anyone lately.
So I\'ll think about what happened before.
>> CORRECT
I don\'t talk straight away if I\'m angry or unhappy.
>> CORRECT
Instead, they endure or Concession.
>> Instead, they endure or do a Concession.
I try to control my anger as much as I can, even though it can burst at once.
>>CORRECT
So I try to persuade as much as I can when a struggle occurs.
>> So I try to persuade myself as much as I can when the struggle occurs.
This is easier the other person to understand and there is no bad feeling about each other.
>> This is easier for the other person to understand. There would also no hard feelings towards one another.
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