What do you do during your breaks between class in school and the academy my?
학생이 쓴 원문
I during breaks between class in school do read a Korean history book.
And I during breaks between class in academy do play a soccer.
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Jean~~
What do you do during your breaks between class in school and the academy?
I during breaks between class in school do read a Korean history book.
>> I read Korean history books during my class breaks in school.
And I during breaks between class in academy do play a soccer.
>> And I play soccer during my breaks in the academy.
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