What do you do for enjoyment?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Jack! I really enjoyed reading your answer. You expressed yourself clearly, and I like how you shared your simple yet meaningful ways of enjoying life. Spending time with friends and family over drinks and playing golf with bu[이름]ess partners both sound like great ways to relax and connect with people. I also admire how you balance work and enjoyment, it shows your positive attitude toward life. Thank you for taking time to do this even with your busy schedule, I truly appreciate your consistency and effort! You’re doing an excellent job as always.
~Teacher Cathy
I enjoy drinking with friends or my family.
>> I enjoy drinking with my friends and family.
My favorite alcohol is soju that is korea’s traditional whishy.
>> My favorite drink is soju, which is Korea’s
traditional liquor.
And sometimes, i play golf with bu[이름]ess partners.
>> And sometimes, I play golf with my bu[이름]ess partners.
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