What do you do if someone grabs your purse or backpack?
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Hello Christine!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I won\'t shout out to the person who grabs my purse or backpack and call the police right away.
>> I won\'t shout at the person who grabs my purse or backpack and I will call the police right away.
Because there are so many strange and dangerous people who can try to hurt or kill me. So I will not shout out to that person.
>> There are so many strange and dangerous people who can try to hurt or kill me, that\'s why I will not shout at that person.
Instead, I am going to call the police to get some helps to get back my purse or backpack again.
>> Instead I am going to call the police to get some help in getting back my purse or backpack.
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