What do you do if you failed to get what you want?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I failed to get what I want, I constantly try to get what I want. I experienced the situation when I needed a score for registration in a college in the USA. At the time, I constantly tried to get a score. After hard effort, I acquired the score in three tries. Therefore, I think I am an effort type for what I need.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Jay!
Thank you for expressing your thought in a written way. People tend to become persuasive if there is something that they want. As long as you are not hurting anyone, there is nothing wrong with that.
Have a great day.
T. Aki~
If I failed to get what I want, I constantly try to get what I want. >>> CORRECT
OR >>> If I failed to get what I want, I constantly try to get it.
I experienced the situation when I needed a score for registration in a college in the USA.
>>> CORRECT
At the time, I constantly tried to get a score.
>>> CORRECT
After hard effort, I acquired the score in three tries.
>>> After all my effort, I acquired the score on the third trial.
>>>After all my effort, I acquired the score on the third time.
Therefore, I think I am an effort type for what I need.
>>> CORRECT
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