What do you do if you look pale but not sick?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was work, l always did makeup. Sometimes I didn\'t makeup, other person said \'Are you sick? You looks like pale today.\'
Some woman when she want to show a little sick, she didn\'t rub lipstick, she looks like sick so she asked sick leave and take a rest.
Our country women love pale face. Pale face looks like pretty. If you had pale face, a lot of man might to help you. Woman who have pale face looks like too weak. But you have to be careful this guys.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [Name]!
Kindly correct me then, do other women pretend to be weak so they can catch the attention of men?
Thank you for writing your homework. See you in class!
T. Aki~
When I was work, l always did makeup.
>>> I used to apply makeup when I was still working.
Sometimes I didn\'t makeup, other person said \'Are you sick? You looks like pale today.\'
>>> There are times that I don\'t put on makeup and people ask me if I am sick because I look pale.
Some woman when she want to show a little sick, she didn\'t rub lipstick, she looks like sick so she asked sick leave and take a rest.
>>> Some women don\'t apply lipsticks when they want to show that they are sick so they can file a leave and take a rest.
Our country women love pale face.
>>> Our countrywomen love pale faces.
Pale face looks like pretty
>>> A pale face looks pretty.
If you had pale face, a lot of man might to help you.
>>> If you had a pale face, a lot of men might want to help you.
Woman who have pale face looks like too weak. But you have to be careful this guys.
>>> Women who have pale faces look too weak but they have to be careful with men.
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