What do you do in your free time?

2023-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Don

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I play with my small toy car in the free time. And I play baseball in the free time too. And also I play with my younger sisster. And I play a Poketmon figuers. These are I play on the free time.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you doing your homework. See you again tomorrow ^^

T. DON

HOMEWORK:

I play with my small toy car in the free time.
And I play baseball in the free time too.
And also I play with my younger sisster.
And I play a Poketmon figuers.
These are I play on the free time.

>> I play with my small toy car and I play baseball in my free time too. And also, I play with my younger sister. I also play a Pokemon figures. These are what I do in my free time.

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