What do you do on chusuck? (part 1)
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you do on chusuck? Do you eat traditional foods? Do you wear Han-Bok? Do you visit a place that is special? Our ancestors wore Han-Bok and ate special foods on chusuk. Nowadays, people vist relatives. They also make a food that is called Song-peon. But, they do much more than these things. If you are curious, read more!
First, they made Song- peon. We still make Song-peon. Song- peon is like a \" haIf moon shape rice cake\". Inside Song-peon there are vegetables and meat. Song-peon is very delicious. It is soft and warm. Try Song-peon!
Second, we bow. It may sound a little strange but we bow to our parents and our relatives. Then we get money! I usually keep it in the bank. I get lots of money when I bow because I have so many relatives! Chusuk is a day for money!
Third, we wear our traditional cloths, Han-bok! I love Han-Bok. Han-Bok is warm and soft. Girls wear a long red or pink skirt that reaches there feet. It looks like a dress. Then, we wear a colorful Shirt-jacket.
강사 첨삭
Hello Rose! I did nothing but sleep during Chuseok hahaha! I took the time to rest, relax and unwind during the holiday. I do hope you had spent your holidays well. See you in class!
-T. Matt
What do you do on chusuck?
>>What do you do on Chuseok?
>>What traditions do you follow during Chuseok?
Do you eat traditional foods?
>>Correct
Do you wear Han-Bok?
>>Correct
Do you visit a place that is special?
>>Correct
>>Do you visit a special place?
Our ancestors wore Han-Bok and ate special foods on chusuk.
>>Our ancestors wore Hab-bok and eat special foods on Chuseok.
Nowadays, people vist relatives.
>>Nowadays, people visit relatives.
They also make a food that is called Song-peon.
>>They also make a dish called Song-peon.
But, they do much more than these things.
>>Correct
If you are curious, read more!
>>Correct
First, they made Song- peon.
First, they made Song- peon.
>>First, they make Song-peon.
We still make Song-peon.
>>Correct
Song- peon is like a \" haIf moon shape rice cake\".
>>Song-peon is like a \"half-moon shaped rice cake\".
Inside Song-peon there are vegetables and meat.
>>Song-peon has vegetables and meat inside.
>>Song-peon is filled with vegetables and meat.
Song-peon is very delicious.
>>Correct
It is soft and warm.
>>Correct
Try Song-peon!
>>Correct
Second, we bow.
Second, we bow.
>>Correct
It may sound a little strange but we bow to our parents and our relatives.
>>Correct
Then we get money!
>>Correct
I usually keep it in the bank.
>>Correct
I get lots of money when I bow because I have so many relatives!
>>Correct
Chusuk is a day for money!
>>Correct
Third, we wear our traditional cloths, Han-bok!
Third, we wear our traditional cloths, Han-bok!
>>Third, we wear our traditional clothes, Han-bok!
I love Han-Bok.
>>Correct
Han-Bok is warm and soft.
>>Correct
Girls wear a long red or pink skirt that reaches there feet.
>>Girls wear a long red or pink dress that reaches their feet.
It looks like a dress.
>>Correct
Then, we wear a colorful Shirt-jacket.
>>Correct
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