What do you do on chusuck? (part 2)
학생이 쓴 원문
The shirt-jacket is very colorful. Mostly, the shirt-jacket is long sleeved. So, you wear it when it is cold. When girls wear long dresses, boys wear pants. A long time ago, everybody wore Hanbok everyday! But now, we were it when it is a special day in Korea.
In conclusion we eat special foods, bow and get money, and were Hanbok.I saw my grandmother on Chusuk. It was very fun, except the part when I vomited after l drank my lemonade. What did you do on Chusuk?
강사 첨삭
Hello, Rose. Thank you for sending this in. I am happy to hear about your Chuseok holiday. I mostly slept and ate and did household chores. Haha. Have a great one ahead. See you in class.
T.Matt
The shirt-jacket is very colorful.
>>Correct
Mostly, the shirt-jacket is long sleeved.
>>Correct
So, you wear it when it is cold.
>>Correct
When girls wear long dresses, boys wear pants.
>>Correct
OR
>> While girls wear long dresses, boys wear pants.
A long time ago, everybody wore Hanbok everyday!
>>Correct
But now, we were it when it is a special day in Korea.
>>However, nowadays, we only wear it during special days in Korea.
In conclusion we eat special foods, bow and get money, and were Hanbok.
In conclusion we eat special foods, bow and get money, and were Hanbok.
>>In conclusion, we eat special foods, bow to our elders, get money and wear Hanbok.
I saw my grandmother on Chusuk.
>>I saw my grandmother on Chuseok.
It was very fun, except the part when I vomited after l drank my lemonade.
>>Correct
OR
>> It was fun except the part when I threw up after drinking my lemonade.
What did you do on Chusuk?
>>Correct
OR >> What did you do during Chuseok?
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