What do you do to avoid catching COVID-19?
학생이 쓴 원문
I wear a mask everyday except when I’m alone. And when I enter indoors, I disinfect my hands. But It’s not enough to avoid catching COVID-19. I got a vaccine at least 3times, and avoided crowded places.
Unfortunately, despite such efforts I’ve gotten many symptoms for COVID-19 such as dry couch, runny nose, headache, and sneezing…
For now It’s too hard to avoid catching COVID-19, due to spreading out omicron variant. I wanna finish this situation.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I wear a mask everyday except when I’m alone.
>> CORRECT!
And when I enter indoors, I disinfect my hands.
>> CORRECT!
But It’s not enough to avoid catching COVID-19.
>> CORRECT!
I got a vaccine at least 3times, and avoided crowded places.
>> CORRECT!
Unfortunately, despite such efforts I’ve gotten many symptoms for COVID-19 such as dry couch, runny nose, headache, and sneezing…
>> Unfortunately, despite such efforts I’ve gotten many symptoms for COVID-19 such as dry cough, runny nose, headache, and sneezing.
For now It’s too hard to avoid catching COVID-19, due to spreading out omicron variant.
>> For now It’s too hard to avoid catching COVID-19, due to spreading out Omicron variant.
I wanna finish this situation.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I want this situation to end.
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