What do you do to balance your time in studying and working?
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Usually, my day started at 9 in the moring. and then i have a part time job in the night after 6. also, i started studying around 2 after lunch. So i enjoy my free time between nine and two like exercisng of watching the video. and when i got the day off , i focus at study at that time. Actually, because i am on vacation now, i have a lot of time to study and work. During my day, part time job occupied about 5~6 hours and study time occupied about 2~3 hours on average. In my opinion, i should increase the time to study before i go to work because i need more English skill but i was so tired that i can\'t sit at the desk after job.
강사 첨삭
Hello Da [이름],
Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you.
Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
What do you do to balance your time in studying and working?
Usually, my day started at 9 in the moring. and then i have a part time job in the night after 6.
>>> Usually, my day starts at nine in the morning and then I have a part-time job at six in the evening.
also, i started studying around 2 after lunch.
>>> Also, I start studying at around two in the afternoon after lunch.
So i enjoy my free time between nine and two like exercisng of watching the video.
>>> So, I enjoy my free time from nine in the morning until two in the afternoon by exercising and watching some videos.
and when i got the day off , i focus at study at that time.
>>> When it\'s my day off, I focus on studying my lessons.
Actually, because i am on vacation now, i have a lot of time to study and work.
>>> Actually I\'m on vacation right now, so I have a lot of time to study and to work.
During my day, part time job occupied about 5~6 hours and study time occupied about 2~3 hours on average.
>>> During my day, my part-time job occupies about five to six hours and I study for about two to three hours on average.
In my opinion, i should increase the time to study before i go to work because i need more English skill but i was so tired that i can\'t sit at the desk after job.
>>> In my opinion, I should increase my studying time before I go to work because I need more English skill but I just feel so tired that I couldn\'t even sit after my job.
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