What do you do to encourage yourself when going through hard times? Does it work?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually take a walk at night when I go through hard times.
If I take a walk through the night air, I feel much better.
And I also think that taking a shower helps me feel fresher.
강사 첨삭
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I usually take a walk at night when I go through hard times.
>> CORRECT!
If I take a walk through the night air, I feel much better.
>> CORRECT!
And I also think that taking a shower helps me feel fresher.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> And I also think that taking a warm shower helps me feel fresher.
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