What do you do to get rid of stress?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are two way I get rid of stress. First of all, I usually eat spicy food when I am stressful. When I eat spicy food like a spicy ddukppoki, I can forget the stress during eating and also reduce feeling stressful.
Secondly, I take a nap or go to bed early. If I do that, my time is so fast and I feel relax and feel better than before.
it is important of me refreshing my mind.
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>>> TEACHER JAMES
There are two way I get rid of stress. First of all, I usually eat spicy food when I am stressful.
>>> There are two ways I get rid of stress. First of all, I usually eat spicy food when I am stressed.
When I eat spicy food like a spicy ddukppoki, I can forget the stress during eating and also reduce feeling stressful.
>>> When I eat spicy food like a spicy ddukppoki, I can forget the stress during eating and also reduce feeling stress.
Secondly, I take a nap or go to bed early.
Secondly, I take a nap or go to bed early.
>>> CORRECT
If I do that, my time is so fast and I feel relax and feel better than before.
>>> If I do that, my time is so fast and I feel relaxed and feel better than before.
it is important of me refreshing my mind.
it is important of me refreshing my mind.
>>> It is important for me to refresh my mind.
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