What do you do to keep fit?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually go for a walk to keep fit. Because I\'m a student and I don\'t have enough time to exercise, so I walk around with my friends before having lunch or studying. After a walk, my spirit is refresh, feel good, and I can more concentrate on my study.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sally!✨
Thank you for being diligent in doing your homework. Please keep up the good work.
Take care and stay fit.🌸
Always,
Kelly^^
I usually go for a walk to keep fit. >> Correct.
Because I\'m a student and I don\'t have enough time to exercise, so I walk around with my friends before having lunch or studying.
>> Correct.
After a walk, my spirit is refresh, feel good, and I can more concentrate on my study.
>> After a walk, my spirit is refreshed. I feel good and I can concentrate more on my study.
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