What do you do to keep health body?

2021-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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To keep health my body, I always try to exercise like walking and aerobic activity. And I usually try to eat balanced meals. Also I try to go to s[이름]p at a fixed time.These are the ways that keep health my body.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Trina! Thank you so much for answering the homework. I am looking forward to have the class with you again soon. Enjoy your day! :)
- Teacher Sophia

To keep health my body, I always try to exercise like walking and aerobic activity. 
>> To keep a health body, I always try to exercise like walking and aerobic activities. 
And I usually try to eat balanced meals. 
>> Correct
Also I try to go to s[이름]p at a fixed time.
>> Also, I try to go to s[이름]p at a fixed time.
These are the ways that keep health my body.
>> These are the ways I do to keep a healthy body.

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