What do you do to lose some weight?

2018-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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I try to lose weight because especially I gained weight a bit nowadays. I usually went to mountain twice a month regulary by 2 years ago but recently I could hardly do it. For losing some weight, I usually try to walk in the distance of about 5 or 6 km and to enjoy hiking in the small mountain. The mountain climing is a good way to lose a weight and in case of me, its effects was very good.

강사 첨삭

Hi Dr. [이름]!

Thank you so much for giving your opinion on this question!

I appreciate it a lot!

Have a great day and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

ESSAY QUESTION:

What do you do to lose some weight?

I try to lose weight because especially I gained weight a bit nowadays.

>>I am trying to lose weight, especially because I have gained a bit of weight nowadays.

I usually went to mountain twice a month regulary by 2 years ago but recently I could hardly do it.

>>I usually go hiking up the mountain twice a month on a regular basis 2 years ago. But, recently, I could hardly do it.

For losing some weight, I usually try to walk in the distance of about 5 or 6 km and to enjoy hiking in the small mountain.

>>To lose some weight, I usually try going for a walk on a 5 or a 6-kilometer distance. And, it is also a chance for me to enjoy hiking in small mountains.

The mountain climing is a good way to lose a weight and in case of me, its effects was very good. 

>>Mountain climbing is a good way to lose weight, and in my case, the result was very good. 

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