What do you do to overcome homesickness?

2019-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was abroad for a long time, I felt homesick. Whenever I had it, I tried to eat Korean food and listen K-Pop with my Korean friends. It was quite helpful.

강사 첨삭

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~~Teacher Kate

When I was abroad for a long time, I felt homesick. 
>>CORRECT!
>>or: When I stayed abroad for a long time, I experienced homesickness. 
Whenever I had it, I tried to eat Korean food and listen K-Pop with my Korean friends. 
>>CORRECT!
It was quite helpful.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: I found those quite helpful in overcoming homesickness. 

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