What do you do to protect the environment?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am interested in protecting the environment in daily life,but it\'s not enough.
I try to use public transportation as possible.
I don\'t use disposable cups or straws.
When I go to the supermarket,I bring my own bag.
I separate recycle things,for examples, paper, cans,glass,plastics,styrofoam,and food waste etc.
and then put the designed place.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Great examples you have here.
Just be careful of the proper usage of vocabulary words.
Take note of the suggestions below.
You can see the appropriate use of some words.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I am interested in protecting the environment in daily life,but it\'s not enough.
>> I am interested in protecting the environment in daily life, but I feel it is not enough.
I try to use public transportation as possible.
I try to use public transportation as possible.
>> I try to use public transportation as much as possible.
I don\'t use disposable cups or straws.
I don\'t use disposable cups or straws.
>> Correct
When I go to the supermarket, I bring my own bag.
When I go to the supermarket, I bring my own bag.
>> Correct
I separate recycle things,for examples, paper, cans,glass,plastics,styrofoam,and food waste etc.
I separate recycle things,for examples, paper, cans,glass,plastics,styrofoam,and food waste etc.
>> I separate recyclable items, for example, paper, cans, glass, plastic, styrofoam, food waste and others.
and then put the designed place.
and then put the designed place.
>> Then, I put them in the designated places.
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