What do you do to relax after working hard or experiencing other challenging or stressful situations
학생이 쓴 원문
After working hard, I usually lie down. Because I need time to recharge my energy and to get refresh. Working always makes me feel down and be tired. After it, I do my best to make my condition better to do another thing. I think lying down is the best way for me. Sometimes, however, it makes me feel more depressed. So, I am puzzled because of my up and down mood. I realize I need to learn how to control my mind. I hope I could control my mind.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Kimberly!
Thank you for your homework submission! You did a great job anwering this question. I appreciate your honesty, and I am sure that almost everyone relates. It is important to take a break and rest after working.
Good job! See you in our next class.
~ Teacher Gela
After working hard, I usually lie down.
>> CORRECT
Because I need time to recharge my energy and to get refresh.
>> Because I need time to recharge my energy and to get refreshed.
Working always makes me feel down and be tired.
>> Working always makes me feel down and tired.
After it, I do my best to make my condition better to do another thing.
>> CORRECT
I think lying down is the best way for me.
>> CORRECT
Sometimes, however, it makes me feel more depressed.
>> However, it sometimes makes me feel more depressed.
So, I am puzzled because of my up and down mood.
>> So I am puzzled by my mood swings.
I realize I need to learn how to control my mind.
>> I realize that I need to learn how to control my mind.
I hope I could control my mind.
>> I hope I can control my mind.
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