What do you do to relax after working hard or experiencing other challenging or stressful situations
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Most people think of taking rest is sleeping or resting at home without doing anything.
My take rest is not about sleeping or doing nothing.
If I have a break, I drive or go shopping or take a walk alone.
When I have my own time after a hard work or stressful situation,
It is a break and I do what I want to do then.
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Most people think of taking rest is sleeping or resting at home without doing anything.
>>Most people think that taking a rest is sleeping or resting at home without doing anything.
My take rest is not about sleeping or doing nothing.
My take rest is not about sleeping or doing nothing.
>>My method of taking a rest is not about sleeping or doing nothing.
If I have a break, I drive or go shopping or take a walk alone.
If I have a break, I drive or go shopping or take a walk alone.
>>CORRECT!
When I have my own time after a hard work or stressful situation, It is a break and I do what I want to do then.
When I have my own time after a hard work or stressful situation, It is a break and I do what I want to do then.
>>When I have my own time after a hard work or stressful situation, I will have a break and I do what I want to do then.
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