What do you do to relax when you're feeling stressed?
학생이 쓴 원문
To relieve stress, I do exercise.
When you sweat while exercising, you feel like your stress is gone.
and after doing exercise, as I am tired, I can s[이름]p very well. it makes me having good condition for next day.
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Hello Mr. [이름]^^
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To relieve stress, I do exercise.
>>I exercise to relieve stress.
When you sweat while exercising, you feel like your stress is gone.
>>CORRECT!
OR: If you sweat while exercising, you feel like you\'re getting rid of stress.
and after doing exercise, as I am tired, I can s[이름]p very well.
>>And after exercising, I can s[이름]p because I feel tired.
it makes me having good condition for next day.
>>It makes me in a good condition for the next day.
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