What do you do to relax when you\'re feeling stressed? Please explain your answer.
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Hello^^
I\'m glad to hear that you\'re getting along well with your girlfriend.
You really must treasure the moments with her because finding a woman like her who can understand is definitely hard to find.
Question: What do you do to relax when you\'re feeling stressed? Please explain your answer.
It is common question for me, because i went to hospital to treat my depression and stresses.
>>I usually hear this question, because I had been visiting the hospital for my depression and stress.
When i faced some stress or strong pressure, it was hard for me to deal with it.
>>When I am faced with some stress or pressure, it\'s hard for me to deal with it.
My old-rooted depression and stress was not faded away easily.
>>My depression and stress didn\'t go away easily.
I tried to take them away and not to mention, by myself, it usually ended up to a failure.
>>I tried to not to tell about it, but I failed.
Many theraphy i had ever got temporarliy released me from pains, however it is not touching the core.
>>I have gone through therapies that temporarily relieved the pain, however it never cured the root cause.
What i mean, they were not influential for my deep depression.
>>What I mean is, it wasn\'t helpful.
But a significant change came along(to?) me.
>>But a significant change came along.
I made a new girlfriend!
>>CORRECT!
If i weren\'t for her, i would still be under the deep dark depression.
>>If it wasn\'t for her, I would still be suffering from depression.
She is smart as well as kind and gentle.
>>She is not only smart, but also kind and gentle.
Her temperature gets me relaxed.
>>Her personality makes me feel comfortable.
A physical affection with her makes me sleep.
>>Her physical affection makes me fall asleep.
It is lucky to meet her, at least for me.
>>I am very lucky to have met her.
She is majoring in Korean medicine, it is literally different major to me.
>>She is majoring in Oriental Medicine and it\'s very different from my major.
Sharing and exchanging thinking with her is fun.
>>It\'s fun to share and exchange ideas with her.
-_- sorry. I don\'t want to show off our relationship.
>>CORRECT!
I\'m happy how\'but u?
>>I\'m happy. How about you?
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