What do you do to relax when you\'re feeling stressed? Please explain your answer.

2019-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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It is common question for me, because i went to hospital to treat my depression and stresses. When i faced some stress or strong pressure, it was hard for me to deal with it. My old-rooted depression and stress was not faded away easily. I tried to take them away and not to mention, by myself, it usually ended up to a failure. Many theraphy i had ever got temporarliy released me from pains, however it is not touching the core. What i mean, they were not influential for my deep depression. But a significant change came along(to?) me. I made a new girlfriend! If i weren\'t for her, i would still be under the deep dark depression. She is smart as well as kind and gentle. Her temperature gets me relaxed. A physical affection with her makes me sleep. It is lucky to meet her, at least for me. She is majoring in Korean medicine, it is literally different major to me. Sharing and exchanging thinking with her is fun. -_- sorry. I don\'t want to show off our relationship. I\'m happy how\'but u?

강사 첨삭

Hello^^

I\'m glad to hear that you\'re getting along well with your girlfriend.

You really must treasure the moments with her because finding a woman like her who  can understand is definitely hard to find.


Question: What do you do to relax when you\'re feeling stressed? Please explain your answer.


It is common question for me, because i went to hospital to treat my depression and stresses.

>>I usually hear this question, because I had been visiting the hospital for my depression and stress.

When i faced some stress or strong pressure, it was hard for me to deal with it.

>>When I am faced with some stress or pressure, it\'s hard for me to deal with it.

My old-rooted depression and stress was not faded away easily.

>>My depression and stress didn\'t go away easily.

I tried to take them away and not to mention, by myself, it usually ended up to a failure.

>>I tried to not to tell about it, but I failed.

Many theraphy i had ever got temporarliy released me from pains, however it is not touching the core.

>>I have gone through therapies that temporarily relieved the pain, however it never cured the root cause.

What i mean, they were not influential for my deep depression.
>>What I mean is, it wasn\'t helpful. 

But a significant change came along(to?) me.

>>But a significant change came along.

I made a new girlfriend!

>>CORRECT!

If i weren\'t for her, i would still be under the deep dark depression.

>>If it wasn\'t for her, I would still be suffering from depression.

She is smart as well as kind and gentle.

>>She is not only smart, but also kind and gentle.

Her temperature gets me relaxed.

>>Her personality makes me feel comfortable.

A physical affection with her makes me sleep.

>>Her physical affection makes me fall asleep.

It is lucky to meet her, at least for me.

>>I am very lucky to have met her.

She is majoring in Korean medicine, it is literally different major to me.

>>She is majoring in Oriental Medicine and it\'s very different from my major.

Sharing and exchanging thinking with her is fun.

>>It\'s fun to share and exchange ideas with her.
 -_- sorry. I don\'t want to show off our relationship.

>>CORRECT!

I\'m happy how\'but u?

>>I\'m happy. How about you?

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