What do you do to relax when you\'re feeling stressed? Please explain your answer in not more than 1

2019-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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When I get stress at work, I have try to relax right now. There are several methods. first I usually listen to music like as hip-pop. It makes my feel better. Also, I am going to make a plan for trip. If I visit to other country or I take a walk on mountain, I dont have any bad-thinking during the time

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]!

How are you holding this day?

I hope you are not busy. I am impressed that you were able to do your homework even though you are busy.

Thank you.


When I get stress at work, I have try to relax right now.
>>When I get stressed out at work, I try to take a break immediately.
There are several methods. first I usually listen to music like as hip-pop.
>>There are several ways. First, I listen to music like hip hop.
 It makes my feel better.
>>It makes me feel better.
Also, I am going to make a plan for trip.
>>Also, I will make a travel plan.
 If I visit to other country or I take a walk on mountain, I dont have any bad-thinking during the time
>>If I visit another country or take a walk in the mountains, it means I haven\'t had any bad thoughts in the meantime.

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