What do you do to save as much electricity as possible during the summer?
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I am vulnerable to heat and humidity, which Korea is well-known in the summer. Therefore, it is challenging for me to cut the electricity from the air conditioning. There could be a solution by reducing energy consumption by saving the light. Apart from turning off the light, I cut the electricity by following methods. First, I prefer to spend much of my time in public spaces. During weekdays, I try to commute to the office if possible. Also, I spend most of the time in cafés or local libraries. I do many indoor activities at the weekend, such as visiting theaters and malls. The second method is a frequent shower. It is essential to have one before bed since the tropical night phenomenon is a serious environmental issue in Korea. It is challenging to have the air conditioning on for the whole night. Therefore, I try to take a shower to put my body temperature down. Also, a study shows that having a shower before a sleep soothes body rhythm.
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Thank you for this Aciel! Keep them coming. Have a good day.
I am vulnerable to heat and humidity, which Korea is well-known in the summer.
>>> I am vulnerable to heat and humidity, which Korea is well-known for in summer.
Therefore, it is challenging for me to cut the electricity from the air conditioning.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Therefore, it would be difficult for me to cut the electricity from the air conditioning.
There could be a solution by reducing energy consumption by saving the light.
>>> There could be a solution in reducing energy consumption by saving the light.
Apart from turning off the light, I cut the electricity by following methods.
>>> Apart from turning off the light, I cut the electricity with the following methods.
First, I prefer to spend much of my time in public spaces.
>>> correct
During weekdays, I try to commute to the office if possible.
>>> correct
Also, I spend most of the time in cafes or local libraries.
>>> correct
I do many indoor activities at the weekend, such as visiting theaters and malls.
>>> I do many indoor activities in the weekend, such as visiting theaters and malls.
The second method is a frequent shower.
>>> correct
It is essential to have one before bed since the tropical night phenomenon is a serious environmental issue in Korea.
>>> correct
It is challenging to have the air conditioning on for the whole night.
>>> correct
Therefore, I try to take a shower to put my body temperature down.
>>> correct
Also, a study shows that having a shower before a sleep soothes body rhythm.
>>> correct
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