What do you do to stay healthy?
학생이 쓴 원문
I try to having vegetables often to stay healthy.
Vegetables have a lot of nutritionally.
So they make me healthy.
For example, release my stress, give strength to the body, make alive or so on.
Since I live alone, I will try hard to eat vegetables.
강사 첨삭
I try to having vegetables often to stay healthy.
>> I try to have vegetables often to stay healthy.
Vegetables have a lot of nutritionally.
>> Vegetables have a lot of nutrients.
So they make me healthy.
>> So they keep me healthy.
For example, release my stress, give strength to the body, make alive or so on.
>> For example, they ease my stress, gives my body strength, keep me alive or so on.
Since I live alone, I will try hard to eat vegetables.
>> CORRECT!
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