What do you do when someone is shy or quiet?

2025-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I usually try to get closer to someone who is shy or quiet. I’m also a bit shy, but I don’t feel difficult to make friends. First, I share a small story from my daily life so they can feel familiar with me. Then, I ask simple questions like “What’s your favorite food?” or “What did you do today?” to keep the conversation going.

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Jean~~



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I usually try to get closer to someone who is shy or quiet.
>>> OR: I often make an effort to approach those who seem shy or reserved.

I’m also a bit shy, but I don’t feel difficult to make friends.
>>> I’m also a bit shy, but I don’t find it hard to make friends.
>>> OR: Although I’m shy, I can still make friends easily.

First, I share a small story from my daily life so they can feel familiar with me.
>>> I start by sharing a short story from my day to help them feel more comfortable with me.

Then, I ask simple questions like “What’s your favorite food?” or “What did you do today?” to keep the conversation going.
>>> Then I ask easy questions like “What’s your favorite food?” or “What did you do today?” to keep the conversation flowing.

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