What do you do when you are exhausted?
학생이 쓴 원문
Adapting to a new place seems to make me tired.
Recently, I changed my working place to Geri you knew already.
So, I tried to do my best at my new job. Sometimes I was exhausted
But, it is important to whip me as much as it tires me out, making me stronger.
강사 첨삭
Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
Adapting to a new place seems to make me tired.
>> Correct
>> Correct
OR >> Adapting to a new place seems to tire me out.
Recently, I changed my working place to Geri you knew already.
>>Recently, as you already know, I changed my workplace to Geri.
So, I tried to do my best at my new job. Sometimes I was exhausted
>> I\'ve been doing my best at my new job, but sometimes I feel exhausted.
But, it is important to whip me as much as it tires me out, making me stronger.
>> Correct
OR >> However, it\'s important to push myself, even when it\'s tiring, because it ultimately makes me stronger
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