What do you do when you are tired?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have three things to do when I\'m tired. First of all, there is nothing like taking a shower and getting some sleep in my bed. Secondly, I read books in my bed for a while. I feel so comfortable and relax when I read in my bed. Lastly, I play video game on my computer alone. That makes me feel like traveling another new space.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy Friday! Take a rest and prepare for our class next week!
T. DON
I have three things to do when I\'m tired. First of all, there is nothing
like taking a shower and getting some sleep in my bed. Secondly, I read
books in my bed for a while. I feel so comfortable and relax when I
read in my bed. Lastly, I play video game on my computer alone. That
makes me feel like traveling another new space.
>> I have three things to do when I\'m tired. First of all, there is nothing
like taking a shower and getting some sleep on my bed. Secondly, I read
books on my bed for a while. I feel so comfortable and relax when I
read on my bed. Lastly, I play video games on my computer alone. That
makes me feel like traveling to another new space.
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