What do you do when you are upset?
학생이 쓴 원문
If a close friend makes me upset, I say her about why I am upset because if i don\'t talk here, I\'m gonna get even angrier.
But If someone I\'m not close to, like boss , makes me upset, I can\'t tell about why I am upset.
Because I can get fired by a company,
So At that time, I hang out with my friend or go to the bed.
I think when I am upset, There should be no time to think about being angry.
While I do them, I calm down.
강사 첨삭
If a close friend makes me upset, I say her about why I am upset because if i don\'t talk here, I\'m gonna get even angrier.
>> If a close friend makes me feel upset, I tell her about why I am upset because if I don\'t talk to her, I\'m gonna get even angrier.
But If someone I\'m not close to, like boss , makes me upset, I can\'t tell about why I am upset.
>> But If someone I\'m not close with, like my boss, makes me feel upset, I can\'t tell them that I am upset.
Because I can get fired by a company,
>> Because, I can get fired by our company.
So At that time, I hang out with my friend or go to the bed.
>> So when I\'m upset, I hang out with my friend or I go to bed.
I think when I am upset, There should be no time to think about being angry.
>> CORRECT!
While I do them, I calm down.
>> When I do that, I calm down.
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