What do you do when you are worn out?
학생이 쓴 원문
I go to the bed when I am worn out.
Especially, I sometimes feel worn out after work.
At that moment, I don’t want to think about everything.
Because I think a lot of idea about company’s project for working,
If I do anything even after work, My head will feel as if it would burst.
so I go to the bed
Then I won’t even think and I will feel comfortable.
강사 첨삭
I go to the bed when I am worn out.
>> I go to bed when I am worn out.
Especially, I sometimes feel worn out after work.
>> Especially when I sometimes feel worn out after work.
At that moment, I don’t want to think about everything.
>> At that moment, I don’t want to think about anything.
Because I think a lot of idea about company’s project for working,
>> Because I think a lot of idea about company’s project for working,
If I do anything even after work, My head will feel as if it would burst.
>> If I do anything after work, my head will feel as if it would burst.
so I go to the bed
>> so, I go to bed.
Then I won’t even think and I will feel comfortable.
>> Then I wouldn’t have to think about anything and I will feel comfortable.
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