What do you do when you encounter obstacles to success?
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When I have some trouble achieving my aim, I often make a schedule to spend without regrets.
>>> When I have some trouble in achieving my aim, I make some plans and put these plans into action.
before planning somethings, I pondered that what is a obstacle for my dreams.
>>> Before planning some things, I ponder on the possible obstacle I might encounter.
And then I adjusted my schedules more effective.
>>> And then, I adjust my schedule.
Throughout repeating this way, I makes an effort to keep challenge for my dream contiually like a managing my health and keeping study english.
>>> By doing this repeatedly, I overcome the challenges I encounter.
but sometimes some events make me exhausted.
>>> But sometimes, some events make me exhausted.
At that time I couldn`t do anything.
>>> Correct!
so when that time, I just throw a towel for that day.
>>> In that case, I just throw in the towel.
In my case, When I can`t do what I plans by the few reason, I forget to do in a day.
>>> When I can\'t do what I planned for the day for some reason, I just put it off for a day.
It suit way for me to maintain condition.
>>> That is a good way for me to maintain a good condition.
After disappearing distracting thoughts, I can keep going reach my aim.
>>> After the distracting thoughts are gone, I can work toward my goals.
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