What do you do when you feel demotivated?
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I think there are times when people feel motivated or feel demotivated.
If I feel motivated, I just go ahead thinking it is a good chance.
But I feel demotivated, it is also chance to take a rest.
When I take a rest, I often meet my friends and speak with them.
If I speak with various people, I may have new motivation.
And I put an effort to do various experiences.
These experiences include traveling, reading a book and watching a movies.
If we experiences what we can’t do it usually, we can have a broad view and make new motivations in them.
In this process, if we feel motivated, just make a goal and do it.
In conclusion, when I feel demotivated, I have various experiences to make new motivations.
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I think there are times when people feel motivated or feel demotivated.
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If I feel motivated, I just go ahead thinking it is a good chance.
>>CORRECT
But I feel demotivated, it is also chance to take a rest.
>>CORRECT
When I take a rest, I often meet my friends and speak with them.
>>CORRECT
If I speak with various people, I may have new motivation.
>>CORRECT
And I put an effort to do various experiences.
>>I also put efforts into various experiences.
These experiences include traveling, reading a book and watching a movies.
>>These experiences include traveling, reading a book and watching movies.
If we experiences what we can’t do it usually, we can have a broad view and make new motivations in them.
>>CORRECT
In this process, if we feel motivated, just make a goal and do it.
>>CORRECT
In conclusion, when I feel demotivated, I have various experiences to make new motivations.
>>CORRECT
I think there are times when people feel motivated or feel demotivated.
>>CORRECT
If I feel motivated, I just go ahead thinking it is a good chance.
>>CORRECT
But I feel demotivated, it is also chance to take a rest.
>>CORRECT
When I take a rest, I often meet my friends and speak with them.
>>CORRECT
If I speak with various people, I may have new motivation.
>>CORRECT
And I put an effort to do various experiences.
>>I also put efforts into various experiences.
These experiences include traveling, reading a book and watching a movies.
>>These experiences include traveling, reading a book and watching movies.
If we experiences what we can’t do it usually, we can have a broad view and make new motivations in them.
>>CORRECT
In this process, if we feel motivated, just make a goal and do it.
>>CORRECT
In conclusion, when I feel demotivated, I have various experiences to make new motivations.
>>CORRECT
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