What do you do when you have trouble sleeping?
학생이 쓴 원문
If people can\'t sleep, many ways are used. Some people tell us to count sheep running through the fields in our head. But I use a different way. I saw it on the Internet. It is said that if we relax in the order of head, arms, body, and legs, we can sleep well. After I saw the way, I use it when I cannot sleep. That\'s cool.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] U!
Thank you for doing your homework and sharing your sleep methods!
I will try that too! Haha. Anyways, see you tomorrow!
-T.Jhozel
If people can\'t sleep, many ways are used.
>> Many methods are used by people who are unable to sleep.
Some people tell us to count sheep running through the fields in our head.
>> Some people tell us to imagine sheep running through fields.
But I use a different way.
>> But I use a different method.
I saw it on the Internet.
>> Correct!
It is said that if we relax in the order of head, arms, body, and legs, we can sleep well.
>> It is said that if we relax in the following order: head, arms, body, and legs, we will be able to sleep well.
After I saw the way, I use it when I cannot sleep.
>> Correct!
>> Correct!
OR: I use it now when I can\'t sleep after discovering the method.
That\'s cool.
>> Correct!
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