What do you do when you\'re nervous before a presentation?(Homework)
학생이 쓴 원문
Today i presented my PPT(assignment) concerning my essay. before i started,,, I was very nervous, so i thought what should i do...???
However when i was starting and talking about title, like a lie my feeling nervous was gone.
I did presentation smoothly. thanks to your help and care, I likely to finish it.
In conclusion, i don\'t have a idea of this subject. only a practice can overcome it.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Thank you for sharing! I like how you described your real experience with nervousness before presenting. It’s very natural to feel nervous, but your reflection shows that once you started speaking, your confidence grew. I\'m glad I could help you. ^^
Please review the corrections. Remember that clear sentence structure and correct word choice make your ideas easier to follow.
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
1. Today i presented my PPT(assignment) concerning my essay. before i started,,, I was very nervous, so i thought what should i do...???
-- Today, I presented my PPT assignment concerning my essay. Before I started, I was very nervous, so I thought, “What should I do?”
2. However when i was starting and talking about title, like a lie my feeling nervous was gone.
-- However, when I started talking about the title, as if by magic, my nervous feeling was gone.
3. I did presentation smoothly. thanks to your help and care, I likely to finish it.
-- I did the presentation smoothly. Thanks to your help and care, I was able to finish it.
4. In conclusion, i don\'t have a idea of this subject. only a practice can overcome it.
-- In conclusion, I don’t have a clear idea about this subject. Only practice can help me overcome it.
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