What do you do when you\'re not happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I\'m not happy I study. If I study hard, I forget bad feeling.
I talk about bed thinks with my mom So I feel better.
(T^T)
강사 첨삭
Hello again, Yale!
Here\'s your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions like adding comma, and alternative expressions provided, such as \"unhappy\" which is another word for \"not happy\". Have a good one!
Cheers,
Jean~~
What do you do when you\'re not happy?
When I\'m not happy I study.
>> When I\'m not happy, I study.
>> OR: I study when I\'m unhappy.
If I study hard, I forget bad feeling.
>> If I study hard, I forget my bad feelings.
I talk about bed thinks with my mom So I feel better.
>> I talk with my mom when I go to bed and I feel better afterward.
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