What do you do when you see someone in danger?

2024-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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When i see someone in danger, I call the police or firehouse. Carelessly I try to help a people in danger, I also can be dangerous too. Lately it\'s getting people who don\'t want to help other people. We have these proverb \'I saved him but he ask me to give a his bag\'. My mean was good but taker didn\'t know. So I don\'t want to give direct help.

강사 첨삭

Hi Eva, 

I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts on how you\'d respond if you saw someone in danger. It’s important to remember that helping others can be done safely, like calling the police or fire department. I also liked the proverb you mentioned about helping others—it shows that even with good intentions, people might not always appreciate help the way we expect. You\'re thinking carefully, and that’s wonderful! Keep practicing, and I look forward to seeing you in the next class! 

~Teacher Cathy

 

When i see someone in danger, I call the police or firehouse. 

>>When I see someone in danger, I call the police or fire department.

Carelessly I try to help a people in danger, I also can be dangerous too. 

>>If I try to help someone in danger carelessly, I could also be in danger.

Lately it\'s getting people who don\'t want to help other people. 

>>Lately, there are more people who don’t want to help others.

We have these proverb \'I saved him but he ask me to give a his bag\'. 

>>We have this proverb, \'I saved him, but he asked me to give him his bag.\'

My mean was good but taker didn\'t know. 

>>My intention was good, but the person I helped didn’t understand.

So I don\'t want to give direct help. 

>>CORRECT

OR>>So, I don\'t want to help directly.

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