What do you do when you want to relax?

2020-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

I try to think nothing when my thought is complex. And I excercise and I sweat a lot. Then my mind become light.

Hello, Bella!

Thank you for submitting your answer.

I appreciate it.

I agree that exercising helps us forget our complex thoughts and helps our mind relax. ^^

Anyway, see you later in class! ^^

~Teacher Gina

I try to think nothing when my thought is complex.

>> CORRECT.
And I excercise and I sweat a lot.

>> And I exercise and sweat a lot.

Then my mind become light.

>> Then my mind becomes light.

>> Or: Then my mind is at ease.

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